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line 17: suggest add in after 'different food choices' : or expectations of perfect shaped fruit and vegetables Bentley,2011).
Section 4.2.2. could mention also the impact on ecological systems in relation to destructive fish farming practices.
line 25. Urbanisation expands into rural areas with assocated depletion of farming land.
line 48: Diversification in extending land based farming to add in water based farming for income and protein sources has been proven successful in Vietnam (Pierce & O'Connor,2014)
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