Congratulations for those who wrote this draft:
It will be better to add:
- With the demography growth, the SFS is crucial.
- Water biodiversity must be protected to avoid lack of fish d'or next generation.
- Countries reforms must give SDGs autonomy to municipalities to engage SFS to leave no one behind and create a SFS competition with awards to those with better initiatives.
- promote agro transformation industries with renewable energy promotion,
- As everyone is concerned, awareness raising to consumers is crucial. Introduce the SFS knowledges in school curriculum. Governments, academy, Civil Society with their responsibility(page 50)
- Good nutrition goes with good health, intelligence, good education, good well-being, good work, economy promotion(page 51)
- Good types depend on every country reality: e.g. Rice, maize, yams, casava...., animals, Fishes and all needed for the (sauce), fruits (page 53)
- For the interconnection policy-making(page 54) : Good reforms: vertical: from national to local and horizontal on the ground with social, economic and environmental development departments in a SDGs local center under the municipal committee.
- This SDGs center is for all literacy: data revolution, data collection, data conservation, initial local SDGs rapports as food literacy (p: 54)
- for market approaches it is important to develop transformational industries to promoter the SDG 12 by developing good repartition of these industries(p:54)
- Nutrition means good meals. What you est is a good quality for jour body (p:55)
- science food is artificial food (p:55)
- uncultivated food also is artificial(p58)
- Voluntary approaches: none(p:58)
- Food labelling: none(p58)
- Certification means that the agricultural products must be bio. (P:58)
- So for good nutrition you need to have good information. Because your good health depends on. (p58)
M. Dosse Sossouga