Personal comment only, not as a representative of the government/organisation.
The V0 draft is very comprehensive report, I have few comments though.
Admittedly, 'inequity' and 'inequality' are not the same but are not mutually exclusive. Nevertheless, the two aspects should be clearly and carefully defined and elaborated since they are relatively differed across regions, countries and even within countries, particularly developing countries with a huge gap between the two terms. More specifically, some countries with various population minorities need concrete and constant measures to bridge the gap for years.
In addition, the report should include executive summary to provide an overview of the context.
Dr. Jainta Chomtoranin