Dear
It looks like an interesting zero draft because it has all the necessary steps, yet it can be developed to more fully fledge.
I have read the Preface it appears good; but:-
preface1:- land tenure in Ethiopian case good gaze from points of;-
- Irrigate ( where mostly encompass the low land ago-ecological areas-or pastoral, agro-pastoral and sedentary farming (crop production)
- Rainfed system (which more of to the high lander and mid altitudes); the tenure here is grazing communal and agricultural crop production system
Preface 2:- this looks great especially the corporate social responsibility might assure the smallholder's producers for future food security and the right to invest in its own land without scarcity to access capital; social welfare and livelihood development might accelerate.
Preface 3:- it is great that the guide does not promote investors for tenure transactions as it will create more unemployment and cumulative poverty with different dimensions.
Г-н Aklilu Nigussie